The screenshot shows the audience feedback I received about my narrative idea. Overall the feedback received is positive and the characters and twists are a main point which the audience particularly liked. This shows us that we can continue to develop our narrative,and there is no need to change many things at this moment. However, due to so much events that take place in the plot, it is understandable that the audience may get confused at points, such as when detective Lopez continues tracks down all the different characters. Another positive point about the narrative was that it was different and unexpected which creates suspense and as shown fro the feedback, excites the audience and motivates them in wanting to find out what happens in the end. My media teacher gave me feedback on my narrative and mentioned the the confusion of the narrative due to all the twists and turns however, he also mentioned the big reveal in the end is exciting and effective, which is positive feedback.
I have watched your pitch. Your delivery is very fast so I had to watch it a few times to understand it. I like the idea for the narrative though and I think that it has the potential to be a gripping movie. Especially if you can keep the audience in suspense that Patrick is the villain until right at the end with a big reveal. I look forward to seeing how you tackle the trailer.
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